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New Subtitle for HA: Which is better?
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 1:45 am
by Winston
Which of these subtitles sound better for the home page?
1. Happier Abroad - Global Solutions in Dating, Social Connection and Mental Health
or
2. Happier Abroad - Discover Global Dating, Social Connection, and True Freedom Beyond America
Cast your vote!
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 2:09 am
by lavezzi
Both are poor. What was wrong with the old one?
Also, you should stop focusing the site only on America. Remember, the problematic issues dealt with here are prevalent to varying degrees in all prosperous nations across the world.
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 3:21 am
by Winston
lavezzi wrote:Both are poor. What was wrong with the old one?
Also, you should stop focusing the site only on America. Remember, the problematic issues dealt with here are prevalent to varying degrees in all prosperous nations across the world.
Ok then how about
Happier Abroad - Discover Global Dating, Social Connection, and True Freedom Beyond Your Borders
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 9:40 pm
by Winston
The thing is, "Global Solutions" is accurate but sounds too corporate link and cliched. And it's boring and doesn't get you excited or curious either.
But putting the word "Discover" in front of the subtitle sounds more exciting and inviting. Doesn't it?
What do you all think about changing "Social Connection" to "Authentic People" by the way?
Posted: December 4th, 2011, 8:41 am
by Winston
How about changing "social connection" to "social opportunities"? Someone told me that sounds better. I think it does.
Posted: December 22nd, 2011, 1:37 pm
by Winston
I've just changed the subtitle of the home page again. This time I think it sounds the best. What do you think?
Happier Abroad
Discover Global Dating, Foreign Women, Expat Living and Freedom Beyond America
Now doesn't that sound the best and most complete?
I figured that since "foreign women" is one of the hot keyword search terms that brings visitors here, we might as well have it in the title tag of the home page, to optimize SEO and traffic. Of course, "expat and dating" are hot keywords too, so I used them as well.
Posted: December 22nd, 2011, 4:14 pm
by Contrarian Expatriate
Winston wrote:I've just changed the subtitle of the home page again. This time I think it sounds the best. What do you think?
Happier Abroad
Discover Global Dating, Foreign Women, Expat Living and Freedom Beyond America
Now doesn't that sound the best and most complete?
I figured that since "foreign women" is one of the hot keyword search terms that brings visitors here, we might as well have it in the title tag of the home page, to optimize SEO and traffic. Of course, "expat and dating" are hot keywords too, so I used them as well.
Happier Abroad
Discover Global Dating, Foreign Women, Expatriate Living and Freedom Abroad
I cleaned it up a bit and I think it reads better like this.
Posted: December 22nd, 2011, 10:31 pm
by Winston
Contrarian Expatriate wrote:Winston wrote:I've just changed the subtitle of the home page again. This time I think it sounds the best. What do you think?
Happier Abroad
Discover Global Dating, Foreign Women, Expat Living and Freedom Beyond America
Now doesn't that sound the best and most complete?
I figured that since "foreign women" is one of the hot keyword search terms that brings visitors here, we might as well have it in the title tag of the home page, to optimize SEO and traffic. Of course, "expat and dating" are hot keywords too, so I used them as well.
Happier Abroad
Discover Global Dating, Foreign Women, Expatriate Living and Freedom Abroad
I cleaned it up a bit and I think it reads better like this.
That sounds great too. But I wouldn't use "Abroad" twice, since it's already in the title of the site. Maybe change it to "Overseas" in the subtitle instead? But then again, what if the reader is from another country? That would imply that someone in every country could be happier abroad. lol. That's why I wanted to be more specific, since most of us here are Americans.
Posted: December 23rd, 2011, 7:40 am
by zboy1
Contrarian Expatriate wrote:Winston wrote:I've just changed the subtitle of the home page again. This time I think it sounds the best. What do you think?
Happier Abroad
Discover Global Dating, Foreign Women, Expat Living and Freedom Beyond America
Now doesn't that sound the best and most complete?
I figured that since "foreign women" is one of the hot keyword search terms that brings visitors here, we might as well have it in the title tag of the home page, to optimize SEO and traffic. Of course, "expat and dating" are hot keywords too, so I used them as well.
Happier Abroad
Discover Global Dating, Foreign Women, Expatriate Living and Freedom Abroad
I cleaned it up a bit and I think it reads better like this.
Yes, Contrarian that is the perfect slogan for this website.
Posted: December 23rd, 2011, 2:58 pm
by Winston
Hey check this out.
Ever since I put "Global Dating" in the subtitle and title tag of the home page, whenever you type in "global dating" in Google, this site comes up at the top of the search results! Neat huh?
I'm not sure how many people type in that as a search term, but according to adwords keyword tool, it comes up a fair number of times.